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WHY POEM. Why does time never stop,miss? Why do people feel sad? Why are you always being chased by cops,miss? Why do you make me feel bad? Why do you never visit us anymore,dad? Why do you never stop working? Why do you hate when I sing,dad? Why do you never stop smirking? Why do you always swear,mum? Why do you call me stupid? Why do you act like a bear,mum? Why do you hate Cupid? Why do leaves always fall off trees,miss? Why do you never answer my questions? Why are you always chasing bees,miss? Why Do you like depression?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/14/2017 8:26:00 AM

This is really good, it is unfortunate you stopped posting because you have talent. Let me know if you start posting again.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/28/2014 8:17:00 AM

Hi Talicia! Pleased to make your acquaintance through this introductory poem of yours on Soup. Your 'why' poem asks many questions, but don't we all yearn to know the answers to many things? Your last question has left me thinking.....take care. // paul

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 12/20/2014 4:36:00 AM

thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 11:41:00 AM

Talicia:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 9:44:00 PM

Talicia, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/13/2014 3:07:00 AM

Love your honesty Talicia..especially the last line..good poem

Craig Glenister
Date: 8/13/2014 3:17:00 AM

You also may notice that your comment about my poem I am Nothing..made me change one word. Thank you for that :)

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:09:00 AM

Thank you

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/11/2014 4:31:00 PM

Very interesting last line---based on my own personal struggle with depression, I believe the true danger of depression, is that it becomes your friend and if you are clever enough to realize it's not, you can free yourself. Great write TM

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:10:00 AM

Thank you and yes that is very true

Michael J Lewis

Date: 8/11/2014 3:42:00 PM

A very effective poem. Simple questions that carry significant resonances of layers of feeling.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:10:00 AM

Thanks

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/11/2014 9:57:00 AM

The last line is a knocker. Love that first stanza more-so however, a fun read.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:10:00 AM

Phumlani Mthethwa

Date: 8/11/2014 7:16:00 AM

I have a lot of questions that remain unanswered just like yours. I just hope as we continue this journey called life, these questions will inevitably be answered. Thanks for sharing

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/13/2014 3:09:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/11/2014 6:16:00 AM

I really love your innocent questions, with a beautiful philosophical ring to it! ^_^ Welcome to Poetrysoup; I will sure be eager to read more from you! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/11/2014 6:18:00 AM

Thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2014 9:10:00 AM

This is indeed sad, I hope happy answers are revealed to you. Growing up in an abusive home I was always told what a dark place the world was and after enough time I came to believe it. I had an uncle tell me the world was not the horrible place my dad said it was and I began to see it in a different way. Welcome to a happy place.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/10/2014 6:58:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Talicia... You will inspire I perceive from this philosophical write.. You ask all the right questions... Verlena sends a big smile and a welcome hug!

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/10/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thank you

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/9/2014 11:40:00 AM

A sad poem... Yet I found it very good and interesting. Well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/10/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2014 8:23:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Talicia :) - I choose your first great written free verse :) - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/7/2014 8:23:00 AM

Thanks

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/7/2014 6:40:00 AM

Questions are wonderful Talicia..more important than answers...because only you can answer these questions.

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/7/2014 7:06:00 AM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2014 6:18:00 AM

Good questions life is hard, Talicia,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/7/2014 6:27:00 AM

Thanks,this is actually homework I got from my teacher.