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Why Now

Why Now? Why Now? You came to see me when I’m old; why now? Why not when I was young and bold? Why now? I lost my luster, my life, my love. I’m rusty with age, nothing like gold; why now? My youth has gone; you’re asking for what? How many times should I tell you I’m old? Why now? There was a time that I begged to hold your hands Now I’m shaking and weak, nothing to hold; why now? My yesterdays were spring, summer, and fall. Today, my cold winter remains untold; why now? You assume that I am what I was that day. I’m telling let it go, none to be told, why now? You want to buy my love as it’s worth that day, Trust me; it’s gone, worthless to be sold; why now? Do you remember “Haloo,” what it was? And now, If you open your eyes, our minds unfold; why now? 12/28/2015 Haloo Inspired by Shahriyar

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Date: 12/3/2017 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Pashang on your win with a nice ghazal.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/3/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 3/20/2016 11:47:00 PM
This was an engaging ghazal, that pulled me in. A dose of, "a little too late" in poetic form. I'm reminded me of a quote I've heard awhile back: "Don't wait for me to die to bring me flowers" ... I get the same feeling in your opening couplet. Time is of the essence ... appreciate the reminder!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/21/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Tim, Since I was very young, I realized that I have to distinct personality. One was always old "Haloo" recited poetry and loved literature, one was young at the time “Pashang” and loved science and studied it and taught it for years. Haloo is the one that is doing the poems. Now they are both the same age. Pashang is retired from teaching! Haloo is still around. I ‘ll tell you more later.
Date: 2/2/2016 6:27:00 AM
People overlook opportunities everyday and never even know it. Brilliant write.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 8:39:00 AM
Hi Daniel, thank you for reading some of my work. I love to hear from you. The form that used in this is called "Ghazal" You can always Google this form.
Date: 2/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Pashang that's a thought provoking poem oozing with lots of deep emotions.. a7~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and good grade!
Date: 1/13/2016 6:03:00 PM
heartfelt write Pashang...you penned it well
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/15/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much

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