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Why Me Lord

Why Me Lord And yet, when I saw his silhouette, Was lost with silent darkness, I regret; Like Moon in sky am pale but sound With him wanted to get off the ground. The figure in the dark did become lost Moon with yellow was modestly embossed And know my love for him now is lost in time, His love is no more which once was sublime. The sky above me, slowly brightens, Each star disappears which sky whitens In my heart still feel his love for me Strings of desire are sadness no longer ecstasy. Our love has stop being in the landscape, Sun dries tear drops as each one will drape My forehead as I snapped and he did desperately cry; I responded, "Give me hope on that I can rely." By Someone else who I am looking for their name. This is my interpretation from another language. Jim Horn

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Date: 3/20/2015 7:24:00 AM
"A" your comments always are adorable while my poems are probably deplorable. Kidding of course, I think. Right, God? Jim Horn
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:30:00 AM
Good heavens. Do I still have to reply to my very own self also?
Date: 3/20/2015 6:19:00 AM
Excellent pen Jim! I enjoyed your piece. A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:28:00 AM
Dorian, Good heavens. I commented in the wrong box. Can you still read it about "A?" Jim Horn
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:26:00 AM
Now that you enjoyed my piece, Hope poetry reading will increase. Jim Horn

Book: Shattered Sighs