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Why Deny the Surprise?

Why do you sit there? Watching life pass you by Why do I see tears? In your brilliant eyes. Why can't you see the bird? Flying right behind you Why can't you hear? Its song, it is sung for you. Why don't you know? That nature sees you and watches you Why don't you know? It wishes to be seen and watched by you. Why are you feeling alone? Like no one cares about your story? Why do you think you are alone? Then wonder why you are so weary. Why can't you see the walls? You have built, sending your life into mayhem Why can't you smell the flowers In the blooming trees right behind them. Why do you stare at the ground? Your thoughts buried deep underneath Why don't you lift your head up? And dare look what your eyes would meet. Why don't you try? Just once, open your mind Let yourself go and fly Why deny the surprise? By CarolineCécile Copyright © 07.25.10

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Date: 7/26/2010 1:06:00 AM
Smile ~ Well what is it, the surprise? Is it beautiful as Your pretty poem seems to suggest?! Would one be dissapointed by their finding? Will songs be as lovely as Your soft and enchanting voice? Smile, Rome wasn't built in a day right! Beautiful poem Caroline! "Much Love & Warmth," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear," Bye!:) ~
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Date: 7/25/2010 11:58:00 PM
Yes, GREAT message in this one. It's too bad some people can never see life in this way! Niicely done. LUv, Andea
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:35:00 PM
Thought provoking piece on how we experience life and do the things we do.. Thank you Caroline, enjoy the week ahead, bb Wilma
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:02:00 PM
The answer could be complex! Great write Caroline!
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:39:00 PM
Important questions Caroline in this piece geared to 'wake up' the reader ... very well written and an easy read to absorb.. thankxxx for sharing my friend.. happy Sunday.. with luv..
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