Why

Why would You want it like that? You will want what I don’t understand I don’t get you It does not even make sense I just don’t get you I don’t Know

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/27/2012 2:26:00 PM

Yes, I'm sure we've all felt this way before - heartfelt write, Toquyen

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/27/2012 3:30:00 PM

Thanks, Jack. Love ya, Toquyen

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/27/2012 11:22:00 AM

Carma sure has a way with words doesn't she? Wishing you the very best.

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/27/2012 11:46:00 AM

Thanks, Jon. Yes, she does. She is right. The very best to you too. Love ya, Toquyen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2012 3:14:00 PM

This one evokes a mood of really not understanding someone. I sure get THAT feeling!!

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/26/2012 4:00:00 PM

I was mad. I didn't understand. Love ya, Toquyen

Carma Sanderson

Date: 11/26/2012 3:48:00 AM

Hi Toquyen, another great write from you, but let me say our father will always be here for us, there is no question why... We will never understand the, greatness of his power, but he will always have a plan for us all, it sometimes may not make, sense, but when the time come we will.... All my love Carma

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/26/2012 6:08:00 AM

Thanks, Carma. You are great. Love ya, Toquyen