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Written Therapy

I am just a beginner A newbie as some would put it Why would you read my poems? They lack impressiveness I rarely write well I only do it to express my feelings out So why bother your time reading these? When all of you are ten times better than me I am not saying I'm giving up But I just started, so it will be time Before I become someone of value Just you wait..

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/26/2009 11:41:00 AM

I will wait, and i hope you dont give up. because i started just as you did. its my way of expression. dont doubt yourself so much, this poem is laced with it. that, in a way, is good, it shows emotion through words. dont give up and one day you will be brilliant like the brightest most beautiful star. ~Jese

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 5/25/2009 8:52:00 PM

Actually my reason would be really really simple. I value the honesty you just expressed infinitely more than any work judged as 'brilliant' by a critic. I started doing this in January. I've never written a damn thing my whole life. Out of the 75 poems I have here on the site, I think I actually like maybe 20 of them, on a good day. On a bad day I feel like a hack clamoring for attention. Like I said, I value honesty...

Cecil Hickman

Date: 5/25/2009 8:20:00 PM

true poems come from within and true talent shows from feelings in the words written,all the other things are just forms and styles to which to write into,,kepp on writing and I can see that you have ,,blessings..Cecil

Jonay Washington

Date: 5/25/2009 12:16:00 PM

you alreadii are realli good sweetie and dont worri bout it everyone feels this way jessbug=]]TinkBabyy

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 5/25/2009 10:56:00 AM

They read it cause its good point blank and it will only get better good job jessica

Zach Aurel Henderson

Date: 5/25/2009 6:05:00 AM

your already good... dont let anyone tell you otherwise...