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Who's the Fairest of Them All

In the early morning light… You stand before me, and slowly disrobe, as you have so many times before. Then …for a moment… as you have so many times before…you stare at me, not seaming to see me at all, as you wipe the sweat from my face with the palm of your hand. Then…for the first time, as if looking for some lost truth you hope to find buried in the depth of me, behind the silver mask I wear, you stare at me in a way you never have before…Long and hard, until…tears begin to roll down your cheek, when…for the first time… you see yourself, as you truly are, through my complete indifference. Written: August 23, 2014

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Date: 7/21/2015 9:25:00 PM
My pleasure Elaine.
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Date: 7/21/2015 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, for the comments and for adding this to your favourites. You made my day. I will go now and read Mirror Mirror . Oh! and thank you for adding me to your favourite poet list. Elaine
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:24:00 AM
Check out my poem "Mirror Mirror" if you have some time. This one brought it to mind. I have also added you to my favourite poets list.
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:19:00 AM
Now this is impressive! Adding it to my favorites.
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Date: 7/21/2015 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, for the comments and for adding this to your favourites. You made my day. I will go now and read Mirror Mirror . Oh! and thank your for adding me to your favourite poet list. Elaine
Date: 8/29/2014 1:41:00 AM
wow, that really hits hard. I LOVE this, elaine. Keep up the great writing!!!
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Date: 9/8/2014 1:48:00 AM
Thank you for dropping bye and reading my writing, Andrea. Mirror, Mirror on the wall, it speaks volumes without saying a word. bfn, Lainie
Date: 8/27/2014 2:04:00 PM
Surprise. This is something new from Lanie, yes? So true. With carnal sex, love has little to do. Love, daver
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Elaine George
Date: 9/8/2014 1:51:00 AM
Hi, Dave, Thank you for dropping in and reading my writing. Much appreciated. Yep! It seams I am moving in a new direction. Going deeper. That old mirror on the wall speaks volumes without saying a word. bfn, Lainie
Date: 8/27/2014 1:16:00 PM
A 7 rating for this captivating write, Elaine! It all sinks in...naked truth and stark reality. Well done! // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 9/8/2014 1:53:00 AM
Thank you for dropping in, Paul and for totally understanding where I was coming from. bfn Lainie
Date: 8/27/2014 6:26:00 AM
I do believe that is the deepest write that I have read in years. Gave me cause to think past yesterday's joys, today's warmth , and tomorrow's promises! Awesome reflection!!!
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Date: 9/8/2014 1:53:00 AM
Thank you for dropping in and for your comments, Robert. Much appreciated. bfn Kaubue
Date: 8/25/2014 8:41:00 AM
- Dear Elaine, this is a amazing well written poem - Love it - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine George
Date: 8/26/2014 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by and reading my poetry, Anne Lise. Much appreciated. Your friend in poetry, Elaine
Date: 8/23/2014 8:53:00 PM
Wow.. I like this write. Thank you for sharing
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Elaine George
Date: 8/27/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by. Elaine

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