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Who's Sleeping On My Bed

Who's sleeping on my bed As am gone When am gone As i've been gone What's her name? She Does she keep the bed warm as I used too Does she keep it crease free as I used too Does she keep our memories alive? Am sure she doesn't That bed will always be ours Come she, come she, come she No matter how many magical plays she brings That bed will only sparkle with us in it No matter her perfume, kisses, lipsticks, lingerie That bed is a museum of only two hearts, Me and you Who's sleeping on my bed Our bed She should enjoy it now Our healthy bed For hers will never last For I'll be back

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2015 11:34:00 PM

this is most interesting and that you would take this dog back. Hope this is fiction. I really enjoyed reading it!!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 3:33:00 AM

Its fictional!! Andrea I could almost hear you say, hell no!! Some men do go this far and some women who love them so much would do anything to save their marriage/relationship even when this kind of thing is going on. I think this kind of women are very strong and patient. Thank you Andrea.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2015 8:27:00 PM

He is not worthy to have you in his bed. I would suggest you burn the bed before you are inticed back to it.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 3:29:00 AM

True, yes!! Thank you Rick for your comment.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2015 1:07:00 PM

Very clever, Njeri; like how you express your feelings. You appear secure in knowing that she won't last and you'll be back in your rightful place...but, is that what you really want?! I think I would not bother; I'd rather have a new him and a new bed:) hugs // paul

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 3:26:00 AM

That's true. This is fictional but am also writing for that woman who fights hard to save her marriage when the husband seems to be lost. Thank you Paul for your comment.