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Wholly Immersed

Your tender voice anointing my ears the delectation of my spoken name that look of adoration in your eyes, speaks to me softly 'neath intensely lit moons, 'midst subtly mesmerizing whispered passion lost in quintessential heart's surrender

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/17/2016 5:50:00 PM
You have a way of seducing the words to great effect, ....lovely wordage throughout...well done....Ian
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Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:07:00 PM
Seducing words, oh I like that, thanks so much Ian.
Date: 10/17/2016 3:43:00 PM
So very beautiful !
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Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine!
Date: 10/17/2016 3:19:00 PM
This is a love poem extraordinaire. Absolutely beautiful Paloma. It leave the reader breathless.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:05:00 PM
Wow, now I'm breathless Chris, many thanks!
Date: 10/17/2016 2:59:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic Paloma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:05:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Jan. :)

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