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Who causes my heart to sing lets me breath causes my soul to fly free sees the parts not previously seen a safe place no judgements the me I thought only I could see What was I before you but a place with empty dreams tears wept in quiet rooms no visitors crossed my door I stood in darkness yet my feet never touched the floor When do we know we exist is it our words spread on a pure white sheet laughter made without our lips hearts opened leaps of faith wandering through imaginary halls flying along windswept fields strings attached to other souls somehow connected to all no longer just a single mind looking forward not left behind Where this road leads I may never know The path goes too and froe I gladly follow there are people to meet other words on other sheets that's why I choose to read and read my mind expands beyond the here People who are far are the ones that are near Words capture essence Like the scent of fresh cut grass evoking emotions from present and past Why you may wonder Unless you're like me interconnected with Poetry Who What Where Contest

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Date: 4/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:20:00 AM
I connected with every word Richard...congratulations on your win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Donna
Date: 4/23/2013 6:21:00 PM
In one word gem 'Congratulations'~ A.O
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thanks A.O
Date: 3/19/2013 9:46:00 AM
Those who have had this feeling can't describe it and those that haven't don't understand it. I love the way you connect yourself with writing and how much it deeply affects you. Traveling "beyond the here" is as good a reason as any to read and read... stellar job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Tim
Date: 3/16/2013 11:54:00 PM
I really enjoyed to read your 5 W this morning :D, by the way, I'm done with my modification "Sestina" really looking forward for your thoughts about it in my latest poem "the Angel of mundane" :D wishing you a wonderful weekend Rick, hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2013 12:37:00 AM
On my way to check it out.
Date: 3/15/2013 9:40:00 PM
This is fantastic. Great poem. Nice to be interconnected! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2013 10:03:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, have a good night.
Date: 3/15/2013 8:31:00 PM
Very nice Richard....good luck:-) -) Donna
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2013 9:19:00 PM
Thanks Donna

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