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Who Us? If we smile real cute they won’t know it’s us Who stole all the bananas off the bus Quick throw the peels Under the wheels And pretend that nothing is up! 10/02/11 Received 5th plcae in "limericks hilarious" contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2011 1:05:00 PM

Good one..A seriously slippery one...Congrats ..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2011 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Limericks" contest Susan. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/25/2011 6:39:00 PM

A nice present, Susan, thanks for supporting my contest, the pleasure was mine to read. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2011 11:43:00 AM

super cool and creative write Susan.. smiling with this one luv.. yes we try to maintain 'buff' .. watching diets and exercising a lot.. moving has sharpened our aches and pains ..haha.. don't need to work out this month.. cheerios are a great snack food..but everything in moderation luv.. good luck in the contest...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/2/2011 6:05:00 PM

Good one Susan...Peels under the wheels is an awsome phrase....BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 1:38:00 PM

hahaha, this conjures up the consequence of throwing the peels under the bus. I can just see it slipping off a mountain or something. VEry well done, Susan. hey, is your computer slow at Soup lately. I thought I finally had it good changing to Firefox and now I am going slow again. DANG. I am trying so hard to keep up here, now I'm ignoring hotmail. How I hope my life gets back to normal soon. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/2/2011 1:36:00 PM

LOL That's a riot, Susan! John is sure to love it too. Best wishes in his contest! Love, Carolyn