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Who Is Heaven For?

The truth and just matched with my glee The broken ruins among the free Taller than the tallest tree The hope runs door to door When they arrive I can not care I'm to lucky to love or share But I find life completely fair I will never be sore Some point at us and some say "So?" They will never work or know But some of us can't even go So who is heaven for?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2009 6:11:00 PM
A poet's imagination,,no end to the fun.
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Date: 5/3/2009 1:25:00 PM
i love the second stanza-we are too lucky to love and share,sometimes yes we take forgranted the good life we lead and bocome insensitive towards those less fortunate-heaven is for all,we cant be refugees in heaven,heaven a country for all----woderful and deep- message---charma
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:46:00 AM
this is really about immigration
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