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Who Are You?

Who are you to put disappointment
in my soul, and shatter the glass I broke
Punish the misunderstood with thorns of fire

The victimize frozen, and unworthy
Clouds neglected, weak and rejected
Water will secure the undecided thunder
Jealous roses will damage the roots of souls
Who are you to humiliate, and manipulate

Spirits of spirits
Soul of souls

Desperate fire so confused
So exhausted, impatient and frightened
The unworthy so traumatized, 
vulnerable, and ashamed of life
Who are you to attack

Who are you to be insecure
Who are you to be destructive
Your not, to be violated
Who are you to be defective
Who are you 
Who are you
Who are you
For I am you

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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:22:00 PM
    D V-- , it is nice to fly this high/ accomplishment. Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Tremendous writing here! Fighting off judgmental dialects, one stanza at a time. Awesome!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem being featured this week.

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 3:55:00 PM
    deep thoughts is this write, enjoyed this one..P.D.

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 5:17:00 PM
    Very intriguing poem here. Enjoyed reading it very much. The ending is unique and strong~Chris

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 4:26:00 PM
    Great questionnaire Delilah.. one we can all relate to from past experience... creative write..enjoyed..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 3:00:00 PM
    wow very good write nice one faleshia