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White Pumpkin

Carves a grinning face Paints the white pumpkin orange It looks like others Decides different is good Removes paint and admires it

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2011 10:03:00 PM

Congrats Jack on another grand win luv.. a wow wonder write ...

John Freeman

Date: 11/17/2011 4:54:00 PM

Nice Tanka of pumpkin, Jack Congrats on a worthy poem. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/17/2011 4:24:00 PM

Congrats, Jack. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/17/2011 2:20:00 PM

Your tanka is a standout just like your white pumpkin. Congratulations Jack. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "What No Orange Pumpkin" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 10/26/2011 6:00:00 PM

Different IS good Jack and so it your write-should do excellent in the contest-good luck to you :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2011 12:08:00 PM

Perhaps this was a pumpkin's "white" ghost? After all, it is Halloween! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2011 10:12:00 AM

I just wrote my pumpkin poem Jack.. hope u like it as I l uv this entry ..again good luck my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:36:00 PM

this is so cool. I really admire how you do challenges with short forms!! yes, please send me the link to that magazine. Is it ezine or thru the mail? I love the "old fashioned" ones!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2011 5:01:00 PM

very clever idea Jack... am still working on mine for this contest but much success with this cool write my friend... always luv those white pumpkins best....

John Freeman

Date: 10/25/2011 1:27:00 PM

Good idea on this one... I have to get busy on minew, Jack. The x and z are usually the babies on writing an ABC form poem Jack, Smile, but it is a nice challenge. Lol Agape, MOses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2011 9:47:00 AM

I need to see this albino pumpkin you write of... hehhe... i like the image before the paint is removed... never mind,, what is real is what rellly counts...Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2011 8:57:00 AM

Very cool, Jack. Why look the same as every other jack-o-lantern when you can stand out? Awesome entry for Carol's contest! Love to you and Sue, Carolyn

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/24/2011 7:30:00 PM

Right on and write on!~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 1:09:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Jack. Love, Carol