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White or Red?

by name
straw of hue
a light bouquet
draped temptingly in beads of condensed cool

a glass or two to share between two halves
becoming one
as passions
turn to

fruity notes
vanillas blush
enraptured in the realms of paradise

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  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:51:00 AM
    Gosh, Sharon, again I have run out of poems of yours to view. Loved this one though so I came back to it. lUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 6:20:00 AM
    Beautiffuly write, Sharon! And best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for your kind comments and enjoy your day!..Ger:)

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 1:25:00 AM
    Hi Sharon :) Upon seeing your title, I knew this had to do with wine ;) Really enjoyed how your tetractys developed from white to red passion--beautiful & romantic tetractys :) thanks again for your suggestions in my tetractys, it did work better -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 9:20:00 PM
    A very interseting approach to the tetracyts. Very clever. Did you see Nikko's? Wow. The recent ones I am seeing are really fine! I'm happy you wanted to copy that kiddie poem. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 8:35:00 PM
    Love these tetractys- beautifully done, sensual. I love "fruity notes" and "vanillas blush" Thank you for your lovely comments and the favorite thing- much appreciated! Hugs, kris

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 5:30:00 PM
    Fine group of tetractys. Good luck if it is for the contest. Sharon

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 5:03:00 PM
    beautiful write--enjoyed today!

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 3:33:00 PM
    A beautiful write indeed.

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 1:57:00 PM
    Lovely write, much enjoyed.. always Michael

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 1:40:00 PM
    When I shop for wine again, I shall be thinking back to this poem. It's taken wine on a lovely journey, red or white >> James

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 1:17:00 PM
    nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.