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White Daisies Bloom

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Past scenic trails once never touched from hands of man no graces' clutched near cloudless skies where beauty rests in trees of maple songbirds nest In rays of sun we find their tune where lovers meet in months of June holding hands with heart pledged vows ring notes of faith when friendships rouse Through all her wisdom hear the call the hurdles cleared both large and small warm winds of hope that bring forth peace a walk through life in nature's crease Shine in splendor white daisies bloom Spill out glory in God's front room

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Date: 8/27/2016 2:41:00 PM
Beautiful write, Tim, the audio real makes more intriguing. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/15/2016 10:51:00 AM
A huge congratulations on your win... skat....
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Date: 6/13/2016 8:09:00 AM
Congrats Tim, for your placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:57:00 PM
just beautiful Tim, ( the kind of poem I always gravitate to in my own contests) great flow and rhyme, Many congrats on the win
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Date: 6/12/2016 4:48:00 PM
So beautiful, Tim, and wow, listening to your voice again, I realize you sound very much like my favorite nephew Sammy. His name is Samuel Clemens. His ancestor was Mark Twain and he too loves to write! congrats on a great win.
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:56:00 AM
Wonderful write, Tim, congratulations on your win Hugs
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Date: 6/10/2016 2:48:00 AM
This is wonderful...7 and plus fav
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Date: 4/15/2016 12:33:00 PM
I honestly am meter deaf-- but somehow, in my mind's ear, this just flowed wonderfully, and I just really enjoyed reading this beauty, Tim. It gives such a serene feeling and I could just picture this gorgeous white daisy field... wonderful poem! And will definitely be waiting for which poem Andrea and Charma would choose!
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Date: 3/26/2016 9:14:00 PM
Hi Tim, Excellent sonnet, very enjoyable read. Congrats on your contest placement. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/26/2016 9:51:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Tim! A lovely sonnet!
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Date: 3/25/2016 9:55:00 AM
Hi Tim, i really like this one my friend. This is an excellent work. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I Loved this. The writing impeccable as always. A Sonnet that just floats into my faves. This is excellent Tim. An ode to Spring that sings in its joy. I feel the peace within me as i read this wonderful write. This has to be a seven....Vlad.
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Date: 3/25/2016 9:42:00 AM
Great write and a big congratulations on your win, Tim!
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Tim, such a beautiful Sonnet and lovely tribute to white daisies of spring. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
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Date: 3/25/2016 2:11:00 AM
This was delightful Tim. Loved the title and the way you ended this was brilliant! #7 ;)
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Date: 3/17/2016 7:37:00 PM
So these are the infamous white daisies, Mystic was referring too. Lovely. I don't know, I really liked that walk through life in nature's crease bit .... like a spring niche. But God's front room is the best.
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Date: 3/17/2016 6:41:00 PM
a great eight syllable line sonnet, Tim. Is it for the spring contest? It is one to make us think of this beautiful time of the year.
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:30:00 AM
reminds me of Wordsworth's Daffodils... you have crafted this sonnet with utmost perfection...and brilliance warm winds of hope that bring forth peace....my fav line.. A perfect 7/7...love red
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:03:00 PM
Beauty of nature adorned with daisies charm beautifully my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:35:00 AM
well, a nature poem from you is pure charm, tim... well done!..huggs
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Date: 3/15/2016 6:28:00 AM
- Lovely rhyming, in a beautiful poem Tim - I'm so bad to rhyme in English - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:09:00 PM
Good job Mr. Smith. Second verse, a little iffee, all in all pretty good. Just teasing, good work...
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2016 10:23:00 PM
Lol...thank you Mr.Smith...maybe the third verse : )
Date: 3/14/2016 9:39:00 PM
I think it's excellent. You have a beautiful mind. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 3/14/2016 8:58:00 PM
Love the poem. Generally I do not care for rhymes, but you did a fantastic job and I liked it! Thanks for your comments on my poem I posted.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Dana

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