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White Buffalo

elder's spirit born white fur roams among brown capes pale face prophecies

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 5:13:00 PM

The title reminds me of a Charles Bronson movie. Well-written haiku.

Maryann Guoladdle

Date: 4/23/2010 7:53:00 AM

Reminds me of my Grandfathers. they were strong like the buffalos.

James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 3:32:00 PM

Excellent Abe, the Buffalo and the Indigenous were the sign of what was to become, the demise always starts as soon as a new arrival sets foot on grounds they do not own >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/21/2010 4:43:00 PM

whare are you? enjoyed reading this poem, any way.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/16/2010 8:15:00 AM

Congrats on your success in John's contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/13/2010 10:53:00 AM

I see a beautiful old Western picture here, Remington by way of John Ford. You got me thinking on this one and that is to your credit. Nicely done. Thank you so much. Your remark was much appreciated. Regards, Gerard.

Sue Mason

Date: 1/7/2010 5:16:00 PM

Unbelievable imagery here with three short lines!! Great writing, Abe !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/30/2009 10:03:00 AM

I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Abe. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Slight Buckling

Date: 12/30/2009 9:29:00 AM

Beautifully crafted.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/29/2009 10:43:00 PM

Love this one, the buffalo being the sign of what's to come. Great work...Raul

Date: 12/29/2009 10:11:00 PM

So much depth to this poem. The emotion comes through your words. It is reflection of history--it is now. Wow!!!! Karen