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Good bye it says with a mute prayer as I close the door, it’s white It quietly whispers from the walls words of wisdom Hush it puts me to sleep the last thing I see before I close my eyes… the ceiling, Its virginity urges me to put my pen to paper and the spaces amid words form poems. Its rival, black… sinful, gloomy, self-centered but white is unpretentious… ubiquitous in absence of colour yet willingly gives in when hues want to enter. Date:2/1/2014

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Date: 1/5/2014 12:38:00 PM
WOW, Afroze. One of the best I have seen on the color white. I LOVE this.
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Afroze Ali
Date: 1/5/2014 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I am glad you liked it.
Date: 1/4/2014 6:11:00 AM
I like this poem very much. It is quite interesting.
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Date: 1/5/2014 8:22:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/3/2014 7:37:00 AM
- A very well written poem, Afroze .... on white paper. . . If it is to the contest ... I wish you good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2014 8:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot:)

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