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Whispers

He heard the whispers call his name, asked himself if he was sane, From his diary sounds arose, with curiosity, he went close. The lock which kept the pages bound, shuddered against the rising sound, For freedom the voices cried, With persuasion his caution died. With the key he twisted the lock, what happened next left him in shock, In total blackness he stood alone, where he was to none known. Agony, pain misery and disdain. A desolate oblivion, left with no companion. The voices faded to a single one, Brightness blinded him like the sun, His own figure whispered true and free, He asked himself, How could the whispers just be me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/1/2016 11:18:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Smrithi. :)
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Date: 6/1/2016 9:03:00 AM
Well done on your first post.... Linda
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Smrithi Shibichakravarthy
Date: 6/1/2016 9:31:00 AM
thanks :)
Date: 5/31/2016 11:10:00 PM
Yes the whispears, what a fine poem. Smrithi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Smrithi Shibichakravarthy
Date: 6/1/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome! :)

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