Whispers

The whispers you utter Frolic through the air between us And excite my ears

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2012 4:18:00 PM

May your tears produce a river of pearls to grace her ivory neck. All the while whispering sweet nothings in your ear. Your words spark the imagination. Well done Rollo

Rollo West
Date: 12/6/2012 6:02:00 PM

Hi Richard, thank you my friend for stopping by and your words. Rollo

Elenushka Toledo

Date: 11/30/2012 5:37:00 PM

Excite my ears!!! love it!!

Rollo West
Date: 11/30/2012 5:57:00 PM

hi Elenushka, thank you for the great comment. Rollo

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/29/2012 1:15:00 PM

Oh my, a sweetly seductive write. Love it! :) Tanya

Rollo West
Date: 11/29/2012 2:40:00 PM

Hi tanya, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2012 12:41:00 PM

I whispers back ..... well done, Rollo. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 11/29/2012 12:43:00 PM

Hi Anne, thank you so very much for your comment. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/29/2012 12:30:00 PM

oh could this be slightly naughty Rollo, love it xx

Rollo West
Date: 11/29/2012 12:32:00 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you for your comment, and could be something brewing. Rollo