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Whisper of Dusk

Whisper of dusk engulfs everything near and far in far away sky a bird takes some silence home silence so precious at this hour of twilight's birth twilight hums a lullaby so sweet for us all all those soldiers tired in the battle of life life now longs for soft embrace of solitude a solitude wrapped in dusk's serenity to meditate meditations of all to connect to their souls to confess to the soul in this dusk of life life's so many paths still in our dreams those unfulfilled dreams long for another sunrise another sunrise we dream of amid this whisper of dusk. ****************************************** Placement: 4th; (September 2012) Contest:Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk Sponsor:Nette Onclaud By :Kash poet Date:15th August 2012 WREATH:A WREATH is composed of a word or words from the end of one line, then, appearing at the beginning of the next line. Ideally, a wreath closes itself by using the first word of the poem again at the end of the poem…Wreaths can rhyme or can be done in free verse...

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/21/2012 11:50:00 AM

Many congratulations on another win Kash xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/19/2012 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Kash!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/19/2012 8:44:00 AM

Love how you take a word from each line and bring it to the next. Great poetry Kash, I am in awe!

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 1:49:00 AM

Kash, belated congrats on your win...David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/18/2012 2:30:00 PM

With hope we all do wish for another sunrise to achieve our dreams and goals..I have done as you asked ;) Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2012 11:29:00 AM

Yours had a deeper message than most, kashinath, and your usual flair for imagery is apparent. congrats in the contest. I am proud to share fourth place with you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2012 8:57:00 AM

kashi, line 1is a great opener and the rest of the piece flows from it... what an original tale on the theme... hearty congrats on your greaat win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 8:49:00 AM

((()))!!Great expressive work with good flow and rhyme...Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/18/2012 2:39:00 AM

You gave dusk a great personality and purpose, Kash...elegant from first line to last...impressive poem that Nette will appreciate...thanks for your kindness beneath my recent works...I won't be writing for a while...just hopped on to read my friends' work....best to u Bengali brother. gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2012 9:42:00 PM

hey, there, I am almost finished for the night. I'm just gonna skip most of the blogs and get off fast tonight. I felt really good until I came here, I think my back is allergic to computers!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2012 11:00:00 AM

starting to drizzle harder again here, kashi.. hope we get better weather later!..:) huggs!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/16/2012 7:05:00 AM

I like the way your wreath flows so well from line to line.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 10:19:00 PM

Kash, a wonderful verse... i can't wait for this feeling... the sunrise, i once dram about... i don't know, maybe that dream was not meant for two... some whispers are so quiet and reach nowhere.. but, the meditation sounds exquisite ... I long for that feeling where it is only i and the light... solitude of no suffering.... good luck in the contest..xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2012 8:00:00 PM

Kash, you did a splendid job with your wreath poem. I especially like the part of a bird taking the silence home. That is so cool to imagine. this could almost fit for the silence contest too! (except it is longer than a few lines!!)