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Whimsical Butterfly Flirtation

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Whimsical Butterfly Flirtation

With rainbow wings, you tarry among the stones
Your caress as light as dew drops in the sun
Searching for a rose to call your own...
A morning breeze hastes to join the fun
Tickling vines, and petals, where you've clung 

You find a place to rest awhile and preen
Then fly to me, assured and debonair 
You spread apart kaleidoscopic wings
While proudly knowing roses won't compare
Nor can the scarlet ribbon in my hair

Dear butterfly, while neighbors won't suspect
This love affair I have with you, 
My hair, in which you light, holds new barrette
You flatter me,... am I prize pursued?
You've fluttered down, to be my arm's tattoo

For Francine's Contest

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:20:00 AM
    beautiful Carrie congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:34:00 AM
    Wow and yet another placing well done Carrie xx

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:11:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:30:00 PM
    CARRIE, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS....... :-) :-) :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
    Light and lovely, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 4:05:00 AM
    Congrats Carrie on your win with this beautiful piece of writing. Rick

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:55:00 PM
    Lovely Many congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:44:00 PM
    congrats on your winning spot in my contest Carrie

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Lovely poem here. I am amazed at the pictures described in the first verse! Perhaps you are missing an "s" in the title? Might want to check that out.

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:22:00 AM
    oh my, this is totally brilliant in every word, your piece flows effortlessly leaving beautiful images in my mind-- the stones, ribbon, arm...wonderfully done and my best wishes... no.1 poet!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:43:00 AM
    this is so lovely, Carrie, good luck in contest..

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:20:00 PM
    AWESOME whimsy, Carrie, and I predict a very high win for this one. Love the tattoo and barrette lines!!

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 9:22:00 AM
    Beautiful and elegant. Love where this goes. My favorite is the first stanza. Well done

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:52:00 AM
    This is lovely, "you spread apart kaleidoscope wings" is my favorite line. Well done.

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:22:00 AM
    - Only the title could be a wine object - This is really lovely Carrie - Luck for you in contest. - xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)