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While I Dreamt

Long hair, coal, coiled ‘Round fingertips, bone white. O, my diffident lover, How I waited for that night. When I held you as you dreamt, And kissed your quivering lips. When we bathed in the uncloaked moonlight, In an everlasting eclipse. Sky, the blankest façade Lit by nicks of white. I carry you into my dream; I carry you into the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/26/2012 12:13:00 AM
Sweet kiss to this lovely written poem Jessica. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Jessica Vh
Date: 4/26/2012 7:50:00 AM
=) Thanks!
Date: 4/25/2012 10:29:00 PM
Smile ˜ Very lovely poe ˜ After viewing its moment I was reflecting upon these quivering lips that your beauty mentioned and thinking back unto my ex and how that in her love and meekness her lips used to sometimes quiver ˜ Makes ones heart melt with the beauty found amid such ˜ Not many things more beautiful than a precious heart ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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Jessica Vh
Date: 4/26/2012 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for reading!

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