Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Where darkness shines

DIVINE LIFE Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Where darkness shines which was written by poet DIVINE LIFE. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by DIVINE LIFE


+ Fav Poet

Where darkness shines

Here I stand wondering if I’ll get somewhere with this life.In this darkness is there a way out 
safe not hurt,will I ever learn to be what I'm, not what you want me to be. Do I have what it 
takes to survive in this world? Do I have a heart or I'm i just like you, live just to die with 
nothing left. I'm I a human or something out of  our imagination. Can I handle this pain 
killing me here this pain so deep, I’ll never get out what I call my black hole. Do people see 
my pain can people see that I'm wearing a mask not to protect me but you. Can people see 
that I'm dieing inside! That I'm screaming. Please wont you listen to this heart in pain?My 
soul is numb. I'm I different not the same is that why I get this loneliness. My world call the 
world of destruction. Do you dare to enter? You talk not listen, are you there. What people 
hate is what I like. What keeps me going is knowing it’s alright. No! The truth is it’s not alright
I live in a world with lies & death. My oxygen is running low. Can't breathe! Is my blood 
pumping? Did you leave me here to die? Please no more lies, no more cuts & stab to this 
heart. Would you stop the bleeding. Matter of fact just leave the rest. Just stop beating the 
heart. Stop controlling my mind. Please just leave. I can hold so much. I over did it.
Now I'm done.
Have I fail the test?

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 6:33:00 AM
    Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 5:09:00 AM has more to offer you trust me I know...we all go through trials and tribulations.

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 12:46:00 PM
    Very strong wrriting...felt this despair and it hurst...but better to have felt than have no feelings...grrth

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 10:45:00 AM
    It seems everyone's heart is flowing over today. Makes for some exciting reading. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Ashley. Love, Carol