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Where?

“Where am I?” The man asked, Passing thoughts and sounds in unstable reverie, Favors, he gave, Enslave his consciousness, People he loved, Rejecting his esteem, Steam rises from the boiling cauldron of his regret, And in a jacket so tight that he can’t feel his hands, He asks, “Where am I?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/29/2009 4:57:00 AM
Very interesting thoughts here. Thanks for comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:21:00 AM
Hope you're still on the Soup ... LOL ... been awhile since you've posted and since I already commented on "Joy" I thought I would go back in time and the answer to the question in this write is anybody's guess ... smile ...
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Date: 12/8/2008 10:59:00 AM
A powerful Epitagh filled with strength and conviction. Wishing you and your family a Happy & Blessed Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/16/2008 5:18:00 PM
Much to think about here. The struggle comes through your words. I just saw the picture of your beautiful family on your blog--looks like you enjoy each other. Happy Writing! Karen
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