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When You'Re Mine

When you're mine my feelings are fine when your not my feelings are shocked I gave you my heart I gave you my soul but most of all I gave you a show my feelings are hurt because of your work I must go now to lie down I must be asleep to be at peace this is the street of Saint Louis when street lights go off its nothing but a block with no laughing kids and no playful songs when your mine I definitely might die in this lonely sweet bed is where I say amen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2012 8:00:00 PM
Lovely poem and congrats on being featured....Patrick
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Ebony. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:13:00 AM
I liked this poem a lot. I can tell you truly feel how you write and I respect that. Welcome to PoetrySoup. :P
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:30:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup...enjoyed this poem Ebony!
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:09:00 AM
Ebony I like it..David
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