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When You Speak

when you speak.. such rousing vibrations pour from you Tendrils of sound meander from your mouth and settle around my neck They curl and thicken and tighten with delicious finger-like grip Soon, I mightn't be able to breathe I should beg you to stop But I adore that you're killing me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 5:35:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Violet Darling
Date: 6/6/2012 7:49:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely kind words. I look forward to reading from you!
Date: 6/5/2012 12:16:00 PM
Violet a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your lif . Love, Carol
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Violet Darling
Date: 6/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
What a beautiful welcome. Thank you kindly :)

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