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When You Look Down

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When You Look Down

It's been 24 long years
since we both said goodbye,
not one moment ever passes
I don't remember you and cry.

To me; you stepped over mountains
you walked on the sea,
you lived life to it's fullest
like it was always meant to be.

You taught me about forgiveness
and to give back all the same,
To let go of my resentments
because i'm the one to blame.

It's been 24 long years
now i finally understand,
You were teaching me your ways
to show me how to be a man.

When you look down from the heavens
and your watching through your cloud,
please take time to look at me
because i know that you'd be proud.

I've been jumping over mountains
i've been soaring over seas,
i've been flying through my life 
with the wings you gave to me.

When i look up to the heavens
and see your face in a cloud,
i'll know that you have seen me
and i must have made you proud.

 Thank you for being my #1 inspiration
I love you and miss you so much!

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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 6:51:00 PM
    Gives me a lump in my throat. You have talent, we need to see more ofyour work Dave; hope you get some inspiration soon, read some of theold poets, it helps. Never did get that soup mail you said you sent. What happened? Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 10:15:00 AM
    It takes a very special person to be held in such high esteem. No doubt your gram was an integral part of who you are. You've written this with wonderful feeling and the love shines through. P S Soup mail

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 2:35:00 PM
    A very beautiful tribute David...I love the line about seeing your grandmothers face in a cloud...she is up their smiling and is your guardian angel.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 7:25:00 PM
    Bless you David, inspiration here with a very special memory. Perfect rhyme and great story!

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 11:01:00 AM
    "I've been jumping over mountains, I've been soaring over seas, I've been flying through my life, With the wings you gave to me." I just love this...Thank the Lord for all the grandmothers that love their grandchildren all the way to the moon! Have another creative day filled with blessings David. Caryl

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:03:00 PM
    My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, David

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 6:30:00 PM
    A winning congratulations! Caryl

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 5:03:00 PM
    a well-deserved win with this great take in the theme~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~I'm proud to share the placement with you and with your poem~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 3:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest David. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 3:04:00 PM
    Congrats David on your super second place win with this dynamic delightful poetry luv..

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 9:41:00 AM
    I hope you have entered this in my contest. If so thank you for supporting my contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 2:03:00 AM
    a lovely tribute to Grandma's