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When You Left

When you left you took my heart, and life as I knew it just fell apart. The days they come and go so fast, they march right on...how will I last? Take each day...first one...then two, this is what I was told to do. It will get better my friends they say, I wonder when...it's not today. For when you left...I gave up hope. For others sake...I try and cope. They didn't know you this I feel, I hardly believe that this is real. Wake me up for surly I'm dreaming, those nights alone I wake up screaming. Too much to bare...too much I say, since the day you went away. If you are truly up above, I send you dear...my deepest love. P.R. Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/13/2022 3:33:00 AM
Brilliant. Just love this. So beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:34:00 PM
Very emotive, heartfelt poem. One never forgets, but let the remembrance be a special one built on love. // paul
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Pam Deremer
Date: 8/6/2015 2:46:00 PM
Yes! Thank you.
Date: 7/21/2015 1:35:00 PM
I CAN SEE THAT YOU WRITE FROM THE HEART. YES, YOUR BABY IS UP ABOVE LOVING YOU!
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Date: 7/16/2015 9:00:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. I feel your loss. I hope each day gets a little better. Keep writing. God bless you!!!
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