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When Winter Comes, Remember Me

•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• When Winter comes, remember me beside you on those ivory sands If frozen fingers reach for thee, arise and fling aside her hands As you awake on shortening days, when Winter comes, remember me We'll pray that Frost forsake his grays and set arrays of color free Light snow may fall so subtly, bright notes on parchment sheer as sleet, when Winter comes. Remember me, that I might play each shimmering sheet Short interlope of Summer gone, I'm owed no scope of reverie but hope you will, from this day on, when Winter comes, remember me.... ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••

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Date: 11/4/2015 9:54:00 AM
I see this won again! Congrats! You're hogging quite a few contests these days, Ly! So happy for you! hugs!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/4/2015 2:56:00 PM
Kimmie, I will milk this b!tc# for all it's worth. Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/4/2015 12:27:00 AM
This is lovely, Lycia, a #7 and a fave for me, thanks. Well done. Viv x
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/10/2015 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, Viv! xoxo
Date: 11/3/2015 5:33:00 PM
Love this great poem my friend. Congrats on your win with this jewel!!!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/3/2015 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! xoxo
Date: 11/3/2015 1:03:00 PM
Lycia, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/3/2015 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT! Hope all is well with you and yours. xoxo
Date: 11/3/2015 1:56:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Lycia with this amazing write!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/3/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, Dr Sharma! How are you, my dear? I believe I have seen your name on a few recent winners lists, I shall go and read some of your lovely work. Chech for comments! xoxo
Date: 9/30/2015 1:58:00 PM
Lycia, a terrific write and win! Congrats! Hugs
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Thank you, Cecilia! xoxo
Date: 9/30/2015 11:14:00 AM
Lycia, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Skitty SKAT! xoxo
Date: 9/30/2015 11:02:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:49:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! xoxo
Date: 9/29/2015 11:46:00 PM
What a beauty Lycia u paint here with ur magical pen! Congrats on superb win!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you my dear Dr. Sharma! xoxo
Date: 9/29/2015 9:41:00 PM
I like how you advance....your Beautiful poetic stance....so when winter comes, remember me....that is of course if its destiny....;)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:46:00 PM
If left not up to destiny...*...but more up this comment biz...*...You'll stay in mind quite easily...*... No matter what the season is!
Date: 9/29/2015 7:04:00 PM
I checked and your name is not on your entry congrats on 1st hugs
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/2/2015 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow. Inspiring and challenging contest. Keep em comin! xoxo
Date: 9/29/2015 7:00:00 PM
lovely poem Lycia would have been 1st if you had not put your name on it please always check rules hugs 7
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:28:00 PM
You wove the words in so delightfully Lycia love the imagery congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/30/2015 4:16:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much! xoxo
Date: 9/29/2015 3:25:00 PM
Wow! This poem is so impressive Lycia! I am so glad I didn't miss reading it. It really touched my poet's heart. Congratulations on your very deserving first place win! I am putting this wonderful poem into my favorites file! #7
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/30/2015 4:11:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! xoxo
Date: 9/17/2015 1:15:00 PM
So lovely this poem Ly. For which contest is this? All the best! hugs!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/17/2015 2:48:00 PM
PS- Poe is just short for poet or poetess
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/17/2015 2:47:00 PM
Hahaha! Kim, you're so funny. I see you as such a 'What is' thinker. Very literal, very here and now. Practical. I wonder what your actual personality type is... (I am an INTJ) Im talking about your Meyets-Briggs type. It's psychology, not voodoo! Please please please take the test and tell me what you are.... Pleeeeze....! The one I recommend is at *humanmetrics.com/cgi-win/jtypes2.asp*
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/17/2015 1:55:00 PM
There was no specific format but I've been working on writing longer poems so I thought I'd try a Quatran(?) No - QuaTERN. I thought I'd try a QuaTERN. Very challenging but really helps with the momentum of the write...
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/17/2015 1:51:00 PM
Hi my pretty little Poe! Um... this is for Shadow Hamilton's 'Seasonal' contest. It has to be about summer turning to autumn and has to include these words/phrases: Icy fingers, Hoar frost, light snow, wet days, shivering, abundant havest and shortening days

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