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When We Finally Meet

Ocean breeze gently blows her silky hair Seductive sway, sauntering over here Rich red ruby lips, soft, supple and sweet Dreaming of the time we'll forever meet Those deep passionate eyes, batting at me Gaze into my soul, seek to set me free Wry little smile, sprinkling angel dust Giving you all my heart, my head, my trust A pure smooth skin glistening in the light That first nervous smile, making things right Her playful giggle, laughing at my jokes Brush against my arm with those precious strokes One day you'll be mine and time will be ours Two hearts beating as one, minds in the stars

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Date: 8/13/2016 3:13:00 AM
Ah Tim, my favourite form a Sonnet and what a beautiful one, so romantic and I absolutely love the flow, oh to be young again but even at our age it is still there, thank you for sharing and take care........Vera
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Date: 8/10/2016 2:08:00 AM
Tim.... somebody is in love.. congratulations, may is you....
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Date: 8/5/2016 9:14:00 AM
I can read this beauty a hundred times.So Beautiful.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/5/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Charmu...I cleaned it up a bit. Happy to have your comments.
Date: 8/5/2016 8:04:00 AM
Beautiful and 'relatable', Tim - I enjoy your talent very much ... CayCay
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much CayCay
Date: 8/4/2016 9:56:00 PM
So you describe what she looks like and what she will do, is this a real person? I wonder, or just wishful thinking out loud? Hmmm Maybe just maybe Tims in love... or not! Great Sonnet!
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks John...We all have that perfect woman in our mind.
Date: 8/4/2016 7:01:00 PM
Women... Tim, aren't they something.
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:47:00 PM
They sure are Ron
Date: 8/4/2016 5:11:00 PM
You are a sly fox. Sweet talkin the ladies again. I wish you would hurry and find the "one". LOL Very romantic, Tim. but then again why not?
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks DT...Yell at my muse...she likes love
Date: 8/4/2016 4:31:00 PM
Lovely write, Tim. Dreamy and romantic. To know your heart belongs to one, captures the perfect moment. Made just for you. Skat
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Skat. That is what we all are looking for.
Date: 8/4/2016 3:04:00 PM
awww you'll have the ladies queuing up Tim - such romantic lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/5/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 8/4/2016 2:39:00 PM
aww...now that is romantic! Very nice Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/5/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thanks a lot Cas

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