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When Things Lose

When nights becomes sleepless When mind becomes thoughtless When heart becomes emotionless Nasty nights when fall, With hardly anybody to call, O god! Be stars shining To shine my darkness Mystery mind when find, No one to be kind, O god! Be right route To concentrate my thoughts Hasty heart when rise, With the world which cries, O god! Be perfect parent To love me till I die by:- Vrushani Thaker

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Date: 3/10/2011 5:46:00 AM
Excellent poetry Vrushani. Love, Carol I have sent you a soupmail
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:47:00 AM
This is remarkable poetry Mr Thaker, keep on keeping on!
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Date: 1/11/2011 8:01:00 AM
I am having a contest featuring poets from outside the USA please add your skill, let us FEEL what it's like to live where you live? Light & Love
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Date: 12/22/2010 5:01:00 AM
This is quite emotional and devotional at the same time, Vrushani
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:29:00 PM
enjoyed this awesome poem Vrushani, Harry
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