Get Your Premium Membership

When the Sun Went Down

Eyes That sketch the tunes that the pirates play And as gypsies dance as the sun goes down They rise Eyes That keep the robes as soldiers fight Then fight against the misty haze But fearless as the jackal hound Barks at the night as the sun goes down They rise But the stars of light with tears profound They shed their light when the sun goes down Eyes That pick the bones that the eagles prey And as bats in the field as the sun goes down They rise Eyes That plot the tombs where prophets bled Then mope around with demon craze Seized by devils with eerie sound That haunts the dead as the sun goes down They rise But the stars of light with tear profound They shed their light when the sun goes down Eyes That sow the fields that the potters pay And as mobs in the dark as the sun goes down They rise Eyes That wet their tongues their egos fed Then singe their souls with mocking praise And dub him king though rightly crowned And pierce his head as the sun goes down They rise But the stars of light with tears profound They shed their light when the sun goes down Eyes That tread the path that the pilot lay And as seed in the earth as the sun goes down It dies Eyes That caught the scene no wholesome sight Then glanced his stare his awesome gaze But though he faint yet onward bound Lifted up that night when the sun went down He dies But the stars of light with tears profound They fled that night when the sun went down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/11/2016 10:53:00 AM
Ken, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 10:59:00 PM
YOUR IMAGINATION EXPANDS...LOVED SO MUCH DEAR!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2011 4:36:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2011 7:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Ken. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2011 6:27:00 AM
creative and expressive thoughts on when the sun went down, Ken
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things