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When night comes it's time to relax sleep too The chores are nearly done mark end of the day Night creeps in again and it's time to dream The moon shows thru dark clouds and stars brightly shine. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,26,2014

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Date: 11/27/2014 6:17:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece dorian
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:24:00 AM
Beautfl write.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/26/2014 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear fruend Fayaz! Much appreciated ! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

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