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When Silence Shrouds

When silence shrouds, he's consumed Consumed by the nothingness that is everything The nothingness that is everywhere Escape: futile. He resists, but his resistance is minute. Such strife in his thoughts Such angst in his mind. When he needs them, 'They' seem aloof? When he needs them, 'They' disappear? He feels 'They' don't understand He feels 'They' won't understand. Rift, distance confects Confects between them: 'They'? When silence shrouds, he's consumed Consumed by the nothingness that is everything The nothingness that is everywhere Escape: futile? Emotions are left in the nothingness of silence For this reason, 'They' seldom hear them. 'They' seldom see him Though his physical being is ever-present. When silence shrouds, he's consumed Consumed by the nothingness that is everything The nothingness that is everywhere Escape.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 10:36:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome poetry n win Lajourne!
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win hugs eve
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 8/11/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thank youu!! xx
Date: 8/11/2015 10:38:00 AM
A wonderful poem... SKAT
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 8/11/2015 2:34:00 PM
Grazie X
Date: 8/11/2015 9:29:00 AM
Lajorne, very nice. Standing outside, watching the world through distant eyes.
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Date: 5/24/2015 9:07:00 AM
Great poem, Lajorne, the complex idea of silence is deeply expressed in this piece. Good imagery to connect the metaphoric meaning together. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 3/29/2015 12:00:00 PM
Lajorne, thank you for the nice reply..PD
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:40:00 PM
LAJORNE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 3/26/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thank you!!! Xxx <3

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