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When She Said Don'T Come To Me Again

When she said don't come to me again Kind of fool like him turned such a pale Like the moon don't breathe the heat of sun All the grounds became up side down Then she signed don't cross the river Kind a fool like him 's just shiverin' Wondering if that's mere illusion pouring more these coldest day Don't chase the heat by the rain Something really out of hold Just keep on wanderin' to where highest gardens shine With her true love in the end When highest sky turning down Every secret's just too clear Like every eye's seen Why all falling leaves still there No fuzzy to trace the fool When you say don't come to me again Splendor face of yours chills memory Like the moon breezin' with sparkling stars So dreamy oh I don't know why it's so beautiful Like the moon breezin' with sparkling stars So dreamy oh I don't know why it's so beautiful Don't know why it's so beautiful

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Date: 10/22/2015 3:30:00 AM
- Hello Danang :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Danang Tyasworo
Date: 10/22/2015 6:52:00 AM
Hi Anne :) you're definitely true about the autumn, while poets in equator here commonly adore twilight as much as you adore autumn :) Much appreciate with your lovely greetings. Wishing you very best - hugs, Dan :)
Date: 10/18/2015 4:29:00 PM
Hi Danang, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Danang Tyasworo
Date: 10/18/2015 5:01:00 PM
Lovely greetings dear SKAT, thank you for your kind words and being my friend. I'll certainly go to your page right away..
Date: 10/18/2015 4:28:00 PM
Hi LINDA, thank you and me too lucky to have you and friends here. That's lyrics of my song at soundcloud : https://soundcloud.com/dana-citizen-of-saturn. I hope I can write poems as well next time... Cheers
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Date: 10/18/2015 2:38:00 PM
Danang, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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