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When or Where

They would meet 
Just as he had dreamed
Behind the tall chestnut tree
Hidden away in her tower
Not many has seen her
No one can tell him about her
And he wonders and wishes
To know
Why this familiar feeling 
That he knows her

Awake from his usual nightmare
Now standing by his window
Resting his arm on the bottom sill
He stood and stared at the silhouette
Of her house on the hill
Just then her lights on same as his
Can it be that she sensed him to?
Or was it just curiosity?
As they stare at each other from afar
Now he knows...
He has found his other half...

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 1:48:00 PM
    I love it, especially da last line. Gr8 work.

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    Date: 4/21/2013 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Patrick Niqros, thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment.