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When Mars Sang

Is their life on Mars Carlotto's image, the Sphinx Was their life on Mars Creativity Our intentions bring again To Mars, loss or gain But then we must ask Simply, what can mankind bring Mars no longer sings For Contest 'Subject Mars' written July 7th, 2015.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 1:13:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write James! Brilliant work!

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma, it's been a lucky streak for me, smiles, James :) :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/26/2015 11:45:00 PM

Well done James,a thoughtful write. Regards, Viv

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Viv, much appreciated, James :) :)

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:51:00 PM

James Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:09:00 PM

Thank you SKAT, hugs//James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 12:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I'm smiling for the wonderful placements and comments received these past few weeks, hugs//always//James xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2015 3:50:00 PM

Well, I don't know for I have not been beyond the earth but it doesn't seem that any other planet has the same things going for it that earth has but who knows..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 7/26/2015 10:42:00 AM

Indeed, we can only assume there's other life out there. Blessed Sunday to you and yours Sara, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/7/2015 9:50:00 AM

James, nice set of haiku but I prefer best the third one.. Studies are done to see the if life is probable there!~Olive Eloisa =)

James Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 2:11:00 PM

Love to read up on those studies little one, lead me to the pages one day. Hugs aplenty always, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2015 3:34:00 PM

wouldn't it be cool though, if there WERE life on Mars? there could be!! I like the last one best. INdeed, what can mankind bring?

James Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, one never knows what's out there, but there's certainly got to be something. It's too vast to be empty of life, and I for one would love to know, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2015 2:23:00 PM

To infinity and beyond - is there life on Mars - who knows but it would be great to know we weren't the only ones in the universe - great take on the theme James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2015 2:29:00 PM

Have even started writing one for Olive's contest my muse is returning:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 7/6/2015 2:28:00 PM

Many thanks Jan, glad to see you back in the body of the Soup, hugs//James xx