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When I Was a Mere Lad of Ten

I was a mere lad of ten living on a prairie farm in Hoosier land, Roaming the fields in my old straw hat, barefoot, carefree and tanned. My faithful dog, Spooks, was always with me chasing rabbits, (And rabbits were very plentiful due to their prolific habits!) We had no inside facilities such as running water or a bath. Our privy, as it was called, was located at the end of a winding path! A Saturday night ritual was taking a sitz bath in a metal washing tub, Then we'd pile in Dad's '35 Dodge and head for town after my scrub. There was no TV in those days and my ears were glued to the radio, Following the adventures of my heroes, filtered through static-filled audio! I spent my meager allowance buying model planes and crafting the things. Dozens hung from the ceiling of my room floating on gossamer wings. I used a supple willow branch for a rod and a safety pin for a hook, Angling for crawdads and wily crappie in the cool and flowing brook. The Great Depression was ending way back then when I was ten. Alas, World War Two began and things were never the same again. On languid summer afternoons on a limb of the old oak tree I'd stretch, And watch the scudding clouds as boyhood dreams I'd sketch. Those were some of the things I did way back then when I was ten. I'm four score and five now, but how I cherish memories of way back then! Entry for Kelly Deschler's "Way Back When I Was Ten" Contest

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Date: 2/18/2016 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this trip back in time. I enjoyed.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:11:00 AM
Hi Robert: beautiful memories and I can relate growing up in your generation. congratulations on a great win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM
Bob H., Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:29:00 AM
beautoful scenes from childhood, bob.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:33:00 AM
A very nice rhyming poem, Robert. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:38:00 AM
A joyous childhood topped off with a 1935 Dodge- now, that's class. Congratulations on a lovely write, Robert, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:27:00 PM
Exquisite. Such fond memories, Bob. Congratulations on the win. I did a lot of the same things in Arkansas, only a score or so later. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:56:00 PM
I also experienced these same simple joys while growing up out in the country... Congrats on a win with this beautiful poem! Thanks for entering, Robert :)
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:15:00 PM
Hello Bob ... those were the days when you made your world with open fields, fresh air, fun, family and friends. Hard to imagine these days - take care Bob and good luck - Lindsay
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:06:00 AM
Very lovely memories, Robert. Life was much better then, and the word 'fear' did not seem to exist. Would love to see this one on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:46:00 PM
For sure I'll be seeing this one on the winners' list.This theme was tailor made for you, Robert.
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Date: 1/23/2016 5:31:00 PM
such a tender replay of memories from your childhood, bob... beautiful piece with fine details!.. huggs
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:29:00 PM
- Some years ago .... a lovely memory you are sharing, Bob - A pleasure to read a great story - Luck in contest .... a winning poem ! - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:05:00 PM
when I saw this contest come up I knew it was made for you. I teared up reading this, we old farts have some great memories. We had an "outhouse" for awhile, I remember my brother teasing me when it got dark, and them mom would make him walk me out..You have a top spot in this contest I'm sure..Hope all is well. BG
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/22/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, BeeGee - I guess a poet succeeds if able to bring out emotions. I have many fond memories of my youth in a loving family - and coincidentally upsetting privys for Halloween pranks! OK here and hope all is well at your house - bob h

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