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When I Traveled Not Alone

I’ve walked the narrow paths of life Strewn thick with many forms of grief And yet the pains I could forget When I traveled not alone. On and on, for years and years We wandered in this vale of tears. We shared the joys and sorrows too When I traveled not alone. Hand in hand, arm in arm The miles to come, we thought not of But talked together, laughed, and cried When I traveled not alone. The sun e’er shone and gentle wind Blew softly, softly, always warm. The storms that came, they quickly passed When I traveled not alone. But now the breeze is always cold The thorns, they tear my bloodstained feet For you faded from my side- And now I travel all alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2014 9:39:00 AM
You will never walk alone. There is always someone from up above walking with you. Nice one
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Date: 2/14/2014 11:42:00 PM
Eliot . Happy valentines, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:18:00 PM
I like this one. Great pace, creation of mood, choice of words absolutely perfect
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Date: 2/3/2014 5:41:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Eliot. Wow what a first poem you have penned .It's deep and beautiful. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Anne
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:06:00 PM
Eliot, . Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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