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When I Kissed You

The twilight sky blushed as the sunset kissed the horizon While the universe blushed when I kissed you

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Date: 3/12/2017 7:30:00 AM
When you kissed me ..you took me by surprise..I nibbled on my lip,wrinkled my little nose,and rolled up my eyes..Now Im just kidding but I couldnt help this silly thought that crossed my mind..If you read my little continuation..to your poem here in my comment..I hope it makes you smile.. :)Ha...Just digging in some of yr oldies and of other soupers. :)SMILE
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Chris Green
Date: 9/7/2018 3:09:00 PM
You always make me smile Charmaine, always. :)
Date: 10/10/2016 5:47:00 PM
A beautiful write complimenting attraction between opposites
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much Zamiha for your kind words today.
Date: 10/10/2016 2:30:00 PM
Lovely personification Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thanks so very much Paloma.
Date: 10/10/2016 2:05:00 PM
So beautiful Chis. You paint an elegant scene.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim. I appreciate your nice comments.
Date: 10/10/2016 1:08:00 PM
Very very sweet..and lovely imagery...I can picture the twilight sky blushing : )..A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine for this smile I am wearing right now. I appreciate your visits. :)

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