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When I Emerged

When I emerged from the black ~~~ Acrid smoke and dust impaired my vision ~~~ Once settled ~~~ Iconic giants were no more ~~~ History reminds us, where we were at that time ~~~ (1)~when 2~I 3~emerged 4~from 5~the 6~black (7)~Acrid 8~smoke 9~and 10~dust 11~impaired 12~my 13~vision (14)~Once 15~settled (16)~Iconic 17~giants 18~were 19~no 20~more (21)~History 22~reminds 23~us 24~where 25~we 26~were 27~at 28~that 29~time

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Date: 10/14/2014 8:12:00 AM
superb write mr.james.. :)
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Date: 10/14/2014 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Olive, it's about the 'Twin Towers' - James :)
Date: 9/17/2010 8:49:00 PM
Exceptional write James..as usual, prophets have always been misunderstood and mistreated. Will we ever learn and begin to "see" beyond today?? Good luck in the contest, Highlander! And I'm sure this will do very well.
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:56:00 PM
Excellent job James! You did so well in in your arrangement of the words to form your message.. Thanks also for your comment today, they are important to me. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:53:00 PM
Nicely done, poignant imagery of time that will remain in memory. Hugs, kris
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Date: 9/12/2010 11:25:00 PM
Excellent poem, James. YOu did so well with the words. and I like how this is not an "over the top" poem about that event. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/12/2010 4:26:00 PM
fantastic, good luck in the contest ( and Poetry for the Soul was written about you of course)
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:31:00 PM
That was quite a tragic day and I love the way you wrote with so much emotion and description using only 29 words. Indeed, we'll never forget where we were when we heard the news. Same as when Kennedy was assassinated. Super entry for the contest and I wish you success, James. Hope I can listen to the Neil Young track you mentioned. Thanks for reading and for sharing this great piece! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:08:00 AM
Good luck with this very well written write...Michael
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Date: 9/11/2010 5:27:00 PM
Very creative and interesting for the contest, Good luck, James
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Date: 9/11/2010 1:00:00 PM
James what an awesome entry for Nikko's contest.. A great commemoration on what happened 9 years ago today.. Best wishes for the contest with this gem.. I might just orb over there to lull my boredom :) Wilma
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