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When I Am Alone

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When I Am Alone

Storming through the day with joy and laughter
solitude and bliss
But they are not what I feel when I am alone
When I am Alone the cold rattles and pains my joints
This immobilizes me to my cheap twin spring mattress
Although the sun rips through my window
I see no brightness
Only darkness and gloom
When I am alone my thoughts are as clear as distilled vodka
My mind guzzles and drowns in a sea of insecurity
I think of no hope and no bliss

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Sad, yet relating for many. This is a gripping piece. Well done!

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    Date: 5/8/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much !