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When eyes close

When eyes close
with a force
a large stone
on a current
of a stream
somethings balanced
somethings hidden
on a needle tip
spreading on the eyes
of a thousand lashes
each dripping
a single tear
of fortitude

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:53:00 AM
    A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Omer. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol