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when the will becomes weak and you find it hard to speak when the spirit becomes dry and your heart can not fly when the world has you down and you can't help but frown when you can't raise your head and you just wish you were dead when all hope has faded away and negativity seems to be there to stay fall upon your knees surrender to God and ask forgive me please

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Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 PM
Dear April: Great poem! God is the way, the truth, and the life! Have a great day.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:21:00 PM
well thank you!
Date: 4/3/2013 11:17:00 PM
Sad and hopeful at the same time. You have definately found the right answer.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:21:00 PM
well thanks for the review!
Date: 3/12/2013 9:20:00 PM
This is the second christain themed poem I commented on today, that makes two since I've been here. I really like the scene set. Good work. I am late on this comment and hope you are still writing. Great work.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:22:00 PM
yes i am!and thank for the kind review i have the latest one i wrote restoration you might really enjoy!
Date: 2/7/2013 12:02:00 PM
A touching and very well written poem April, I like it. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 12:10:00 PM
thanks and you too!
Date: 2/6/2013 3:26:00 PM
Very nicely done........... George
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:34:00 AM
thank you very much!
Date: 2/6/2013 2:12:00 PM
Hi April Great poem!!! It is hard to stay positive, when it seems as if the majority of the people are trying to drag you down. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Peace Sheol
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:35:00 AM
your welcome and thank you very much for the comment!
Date: 2/6/2013 11:36:00 AM
BRILLIANT my dear April! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:36:00 AM
why thank you for the positive feedback!
Date: 2/6/2013 4:42:00 AM
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:48:00 AM
So inspiring and touching. I love it:)
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:36:00 AM
why thank you very much

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