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What Would You Do

What would you do What would you say Knowing l give you the best of Me? Would you scream? Would you jump and shout? Would you yell? I initiate I give Love Lord

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/6/2012 7:27:00 PM

Love this!Beautiful poem.

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/6/2012 7:52:00 PM

Thanks, Kash. Love ya, Toquyen

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/5/2012 6:34:00 PM

i am certain he would love in return! Nice poem :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/6/2012 4:40:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra :)) Love ya, Toquyen

Farida Akhtar

Date: 11/5/2012 12:16:00 PM

I like your poem -very subtle. Thanks for your encouraging words for my poem Love.

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/6/2012 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, Farida. Love ya, Toquyen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/5/2012 7:01:00 AM

He'd probably be proud of you, Toquyen. Good written. - Wish you a good day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/6/2012 4:36:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. I got it!! You too. Love ya, Toquyen