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What This Old Lady Feels Like

This old lady feels like a broken down car Many miles on her feet Joints need oiled, so they can move A new censor her memory is failing Has to have a spark plug to keep her heart ticking smoothly Her bones are as brittle as the wiring gets at times Eyes are getting dim like the headlights do Only thing not needed is the horn she keeps on a tooting Overall, she just needs totally restored. © Melanie . All rights reserved, 12 hours ago

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Date: 10/17/2014 8:42:00 AM
An old car and an old lady--what a comparison. Well done, Melanie.
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Date: 10/17/2014 8:52:00 AM
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Book: Shattered Sighs