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What Should a Love Story Be

What should the perfect love story be? Maybe about the future or past history Maybe the story should just be about today If it were your final breath what would you say? The Lord is the maker and the keeper of time He is the giver of love and all that’s divine How can any love story not involve him? The keeper of truth, the forgiver of sin Jesus Christ is the father and I am but a seed Regardless of the path I shall follow his lead I praise God for the pain that hinders my way For it truly does offer plenty of time to pray The more that I pray the more clearly I see Exactly what a perfect love poem should be It should be hot as the desert, beautiful as the snow Born way deep in the heart so it can forever glow It should speak the honest truth about your dearest friend How the strength of your love helped each of you to mend The story should be of two lovers, bound by the soul Yet each is has the freedom to leave, if they wish to go You see true love was truly intended for us to caress Tell me, “How can an unseen entity ever be possessed” Love is a part of your heart and a part of your soul So please caress it, bless it and make it your goal And that’s what a true love poem is really about Cherishing each others love through all the doubt

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Date: 6/25/2009 5:51:00 PM
Any religous poem is inspirational... I call it a safety net. Not being smart or nothing just saying.. enjoyed this and have a great a day.
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Date: 6/24/2009 9:01:00 PM
This is a great poem!! This is enlightening and inspirational!
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Date: 6/22/2009 1:58:00 PM
So true, so clear, yet enlightening. Love your work.
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Date: 6/21/2009 10:59:00 AM
I can only repreat what has already been said but the emotions evoked within me are mine, and mine alone. How nicely this piece settled in my heart and stirred the blissful embers of its warmth. Man, you are even exacting it from me! LOL. A pleasure to read and share... ~<><
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Date: 6/20/2009 6:17:00 PM
Its not every day you get graced with the magnificent, but i just have. Exceptional poem MJ>>James
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Date: 6/20/2009 5:09:00 AM
I am In Love with this One!The way yew described Love Poem as hot as a desert and The snow.I mean You've totally put Every Kind of love story in This one:The Past Love(exes),The love of god,The sin of love,The prayer(desperation)Of love,The work of love:How it mends and helps others,The eternity of Love,That love is does not cost a thing and is not possessed,The peaceful being Of friendship Of love,And being there.Wonderful-->I hope i Didn't Miss anything!=)
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Date: 6/20/2009 3:47:00 AM
Michael, this is one of the most amazing and inspiring love poem I've ever read. Post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 6/19/2009 5:43:00 PM
I have to say Micheal that is one of the best love poems that I have ever read. It is just so beautifully done. Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 6/19/2009 10:57:00 AM
this is one of the best couplets I've ever read....!! Believe me....!! I love this...By the way MJ, thanx for the coment > crystal
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:52:00 PM
Excellent teaching well penned as well Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/18/2009 7:41:00 PM
Mike, Hi. None taken. I wish you all the best. Thanks for taking time to comment on my little poem. I am humbled and gratified by your kind remarks Thank you. It means a lot to me. regards, GK
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:49:00 PM
I hear you Mike. Well I'd like to hear you but you make it sound so easy... I don't praise God for the pain that hinders me. I grab my imaginary knife and start hacking away at all my enemies in my mind. Not in real life mind you, all just thoughts but very dark and not so loving thoughts. I'd love to gloss over those and focus only on the loving but that's just not in the cards right now. I wish you only the best my friend. Good luck with your searching. I'll see you around. -Yoni
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Date: 6/18/2009 9:48:00 AM
Wow what a powerful piece. You do have a way with words. I enjoy reading your work also. I will definately let you know when everything is completing. Can I tell you my side is an extension of "Healing Through Poetry". I took the title from a comment you made concerning my life experience and the poems that you reviewed.
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Date: 6/18/2009 4:46:00 AM
we're all treading on each others dreams right
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Date: 6/17/2009 2:55:00 PM
I have read on line about your illness and I am so sorry. I truly wish you the best. Thank you for your kind remarks regarding my entry and I will keep you in my prayers when I go to church. You are a man of great faith and that is no small virtue in these times. Regards,GK
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful work, Mike. Love, daver
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:28:00 PM
Another inspirational poem of truth. Your faith shines through your words. Creative view on love. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Hope you are getting better. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:15:00 PM
of course a real love poem has God in it. great job. John H Loving III
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:38:00 AM
This is truely written from the heart, for your love is pure and true Michael. Glad to be back online again and hope to catch up more.. my blog has more details also. Love you my Friend! ~Tru~
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Date: 6/15/2009 5:01:00 PM
Michael, this poem brings the reader along on an inspirational journey of true love! Jim
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:52:00 PM
Your love story is one to share, .... it gives encouragement to others who are looking to find what true love is really about...you have made your love story one that others can learn from. Lovely poem, Michael! God Bless you both. Carrie
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Date: 6/15/2009 2:48:00 PM
Sorry your in such pain..but you are writing so very well..Im glad you have such a love.. Beautiful..so beautiful. BG
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:12:00 PM
Love between two intertwined with faith, indeed the ultimate love story. Just simply beauty upon beauty. Many important lines with messages to take to heart. Whether your pain is making you more spiritual and happier inside or not, I still am wishing and praying for your physical healing, always. Love, Shar YF4L
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:11:00 PM
A touch of wistfulness and flavored with good old common sense. Love how you end this gentle and beautiful poem. Well done. Take care. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:04:00 PM
That's a beauty Micheal..Pure as true love can be... Farah
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