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What Planet Am I On

Hello...my friend, time hasn't exhausted me of your kindness. I think of you and I become mindless. If I climbed a mountain for you, would I then be noteworthy of your love? Could this be some fantasy that is just plain dumb? It's an emotional affair between my mind and your being. I became blind to your needs but now I'm seeing. If I turned the sun inside out, could I just keep dreaming to associate what your all about? I will just jump head first off a cloud and dream of you and have my doubts. Your needs are different that much is true. When I come back to earth my heart will turn blue.

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Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 5:43:00 PM

JERALYN, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT

Jeralyn Tolliver
Date: 12/30/2015 7:35:00 PM

Thanks SKAT A. I never thought that a poem that I dreamed up while driving would be a feature on the home page. Thanks again.

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

Date: 7/28/2015 10:40:00 AM

nice flow to your poem. Though it might be even better if you put them in stanzas to show the message even clearer. This is just my opinion. You are on the right path with this one to give the world a glimpse into where you are....

Jeralyn Tolliver
Date: 7/28/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for your wisdom and kind words