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What Is a Moment

What is a moment? It’s a flash before your eyes. A moment comes and goes before you realize; A moment is what drives you with every breath you take and can be your crowning glory or can be your worst mistake. A moment is that instant when you turn left or right, and if you make the wrong turn you may never see the light... or a moment is that flash which tells you to stop or start, where you make a special friendship or you have one torn apart. And so a moment is important for every step that you put forward, there’s a million moments every day to offer shame or a reward, and you should treasure every moment that goes dashing through your mind, for a moment’s not immortal, it is swift but well defined. So what is a moment? It’s your birth, your death, your soul, the very thing that drives you, which sometimes you can’t control; but moments are so precious, they are seeds that you have sown... from your birth until your death, each moment is your very own.

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Date: 7/18/2016 11:09:00 PM
Very profound, Lindsay, a fine piece. A #7 and a fave for me, thanks. And congrats on getting a featured poem. Regards, Viv
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/25/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Viv for your kind words. It did take me a bit more than a moment to write this though - Lindsay
Date: 4/25/2015 9:09:00 AM
Very poignant Lindsay and very true. The last two lines sum it all up, for sure. "from your birth until your death, each moment is your own." This piece of yours shows lots of insight, as does most of your work. Best to you. Diane L.
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:58:00 PM
Hello Diane ... thank you very much for your kind comment Diane. A bit late with a reply aren't I; sorry - Lindsay
Date: 2/7/2015 9:25:00 PM
Lindsay, another gem, one with exceptional depth. The concluding lines are superb: "they [moments] are seeds you have sown...from your birth until your death, each moment is your very own." Oh, so true; I love it! (Just as I love "No Food Rule.")
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Date: 2/9/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Paul, your comments are always encouraging and gives me the spirit to keep on writing and posting. Catch you soon Paul - Lindsay
Date: 2/3/2015 12:41:00 AM
I like this poem, Lindsay--meaningful and thought-provoking. Thanks. Carol
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Date: 2/9/2015 8:37:00 PM
Hello Carol... I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poem. Yes, we all should worship every moment that we live as mortals. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 1/15/2015 6:12:00 PM
What you say is so true and each moment should be lived a cherished to the best of our abilities for we never know when our moment comes. I like your thoughts on this great poem. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/16/2015 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Phyllis... in the bredth of time; we don't really have of it to waste a moment especially with our decisions to cherish what we're lucky enough to be granted. Catch you soon Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 1/5/2015 1:40:00 PM
Very nice! I like outwardly directed poems that touch on philosophical themes like this. You are writing for the reader. That's the sign of a mature poet. So many poets never reach this point. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are flawless. If you ever need any help with other technical parts, like meter, I'll be glad to help you tweak.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/10/2015 6:51:00 PM
G'day Roy... Thank you for the encouraging comment Roy... of course I'll accept any advice you offer. Catch you later Roy. Lindsay
Date: 1/1/2015 7:11:00 PM
Lindsay, I like this poem, and how deep you went, intriguing my mind, with what a moment is, through your perspective. I have so many of these moments. I guess, that's life, in one word. MOMENT... Hope you are enjoying the first day of 2015... Love Linda
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/2/2015 4:36:00 PM
G'day Linda... thanks for your comment. I guess that even though a moment is an instant, they can change the direction of every individual. Thanks again Linda-Lindsay
Date: 12/30/2014 10:05:00 PM
Very nicely put together...an excellent poem!! :) john.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2014 1:58:00 AM
Thank you John for reading and leaving an encouraging comment. Lindsay

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